You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a postponement of an

interview

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with the college tutor from 10:00 am on the 20th of May to another day

that is

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convenient for you. I sincerely apologize for not being able to attend the meeting

according to

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the schedule. Unfortunately, I am having a previously arranged job

interview

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at the same time, which cannot be delayed. Both job and study are of

highly

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importance for me, since I have been dreaming about entering your college for the

last

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two years, but I need a decent salary to be able to cover all tuition fees.

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, I am hoping that the rescheduling of the admission

interview

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would be possible, giving me a chance to attend another appointment as well.

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, I would ask you to provide more details regarding the enrollment assessment. Could you please clarify whether there will be any written assignments, so I can better prepare for them

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, I would like to know the duration of the

interview

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in order to be able to plan the day. Thank you in advance for your answers. I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Helen Tan

fednastya000Fri May 10 2024

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Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance the clarity and impact of your message.

flow

Consider incorporating transitional phrases between paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.

task response

You've clearly addressed all parts of the task with a well-structured response.

tone

The formal tone is perfectly suited to the context of writing to an admissions tutor.

structure

Greeting and closing are appropriately used, enhancing the overall structure.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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