You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request a postponement of an
interview
with the college tutor from 10:00 am on the 20th of May to another day that is
convenient for you.
I sincerely apologize for not being able to attend the meeting according to
the schedule. Unfortunately, I am having a previously arranged job interview
at the same time, which cannot be delayed. Both job and study are of highly
importance for me, since I have been dreaming about entering your college for the Change the adverb
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last
two years, but I need a decent salary to be able to cover all tuition fees. Therefore
, I am hoping that the rescheduling of the admission interview
would be possible, giving me a chance to attend another appointment as well.
Additionally
, I would ask you to provide more details regarding the enrollment assessment. Could you please clarify whether there will be any written assignments, so I can better prepare for them.
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Also
, I would like to know the duration of the interview
in order to be able to plan the day.
Thank you in advance for your answers. I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Helen TanSubmitted by fednastya000 on
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