The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The blueprint illustrates the changes that occurred at a
school
from 1985 to the present day.
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Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the floor area remains unchanged over time Linking Words
whereas
, different rooms were added and some are removed. Linking Words
Also
, the Linking Words
school
population increased significantly in the present day.
In 1985, the Use synonyms
school
's playing fields accounts for the largest area, Use synonyms
while
a small Linking Words
office
near the entrance was the smallest. The area had 4 rooms, the library was Use synonyms
then
the biggest room which is located behind the Linking Words
office
, next to it is a classroom, and Use synonyms
then
across Linking Words
that is
a two-storey classroom. The car park is located across the small Linking Words
office
occupying the mid-upper portion of the map.
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However
, at present-day the Linking Words
school
added more chambers. The playing fields and the car park obviously reduce its size. They added a pool and a fitness centre which is built beside each other next to the field. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
office
and the car park locations remain unchanged. Use synonyms
Moreover
, behind it is the learning centre, Linking Words
then
a computer room, respectively. There are now 2 classrooms in front of the field, Linking Words
while
the other one is in front of the pool and fitness centre.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, office with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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