The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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The bar chart illustrates the details about the amount vehicle trips into the town made by citizens and non-citizens. The unit of measurement is the amount of Journey per day.
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, it can be seen that the movement of inhabitants was high in the first few years.
To begin
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, the value gotten from locals trip was almost 10000, which did not get below 9000 from 1996 to 1999 .
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non-locals recorded from around 5000 to an increase of about 8000 within the same year. An improvement in the parking meters leads non-residence to make journeys of approximately 8000 per day between 2000 to 2002. But
then
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the value of residents dropped dramatically to 5000 and below.
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,
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street and park lane were shut to traffic.
this
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brought a significant decrease with both individual types of movement, from 2002 to 2005 locals could not exceed more than 5000.
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non-citizens where were below 4000 , in 3005 they gradually rose to about 5000 journeys.
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