Some people think cities are the best to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said that living in the

cities

is the best way. The others said it would be better to live in the

countryside

.

This

writer will provide both points of view about that idea. It is argued that living in the

cities

can gain a

lot

of opportunities to earn money and easy to develop a career in the future.

According to

my opinion, it has a

lot

of chance to do that. Because of the developed city nowadays, many fields are developed rapidly

as well as

there

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a

lot

of huge factories.

Moreover

,

life

in the

cities

is

also

convenient for working and studying. Take Japan as an example, the percentage of the amount of people who get

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well-paid jobs or a successful career in

cities

is always far higher than the ones in the country. In short, living in the

cities

has a

lot

of benefits for the economy and a successful career.

However

, it is said that living in the

countryside

also

has advantages for some

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in

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life

.

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first,

life

in the

countryside

is rather peaceful and slightly more than

life

in the

cities

as well as

the

countryside

is not as polluted as the

cities

.

According to

the research, the percentage of the amount of air pollution and waste pollution, in the city’s ones is far higher than in the

countryside

ones. So , living in the

countryside

is the best way to have good health and peaceful

life

. In conclusion, living in the

cities

or in the

countryside

is both the best way to live. In my opinion, living in the

cities

is good for the time when we were young and enough strong.

In contrast

, living in the

countryside

is intended for the older years old.