You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Dear Prathyu, I hope things are going well; I'm writing

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letter to ask you if you're interested in purchasing a laptop of mine. I'll be happy to give my laptop for a lower price rather than giving it to someone else. I'm really not convinced with the idea of selling it,As, I purchased it just 2 months ago.You know that

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week I got engaged to Jessy, and out of surprise,she gifted me a Mac, which I have wanted, for, many years. Well,to give details about my PC. It was manufactured by Dell company,

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, the features are impressive, providing with advanced touch screen,

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many other updated applications present, with an inbuilt RAM of surge capacity.Even after using it for a few weeks it just appears as a new one without any scratches. I think,there might be more applications,Which, I haven't used yet. Why can't you come and have a look at it by yourself?

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, I'll be free next weekend, you can directly come down to my home

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so that we can have a detailed talk. I'm eagerly waiting to see you next week. Best wishes, Ramu

abram.yaminiWed Aug 23 2023

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