The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

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The line graph compares the average consumption of

fish

and three kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

Overall

, the amount of

chicken

eaten increased over that time, but the opposite was true for

beef

, lamb and

fish

Initially

beef

was the favourite food but it was replaced by

chicken

in the second half of the period. In 1979, each person in

this

nation consumed about 220

grams

beef

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of beef

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per week, compared to about 150

grams

chicken

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of chicken

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or lamb.

Fish

was the least popular food, with about 60

grams

consumed weekly. From that time to 2004,

beef

consumption reduced significantly to only about 100

grams

, but the figure for

chicken

showed a dramatic rise to peak at about 250

grams

each person. The average consumption of lamb declined gradually to just over 50

grams

per week, and

similarly

, less

fish

was eaten per head in

this

nation, with its figure falling by about 15

grams

a week

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Maintaining public libraries is now a waste of money since computer technology is already replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The rise of social media has affected personal relations and society as a whole. Do the advantage of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages? (KN)