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In recent years, animal slaughter as a source of food has been receiving a great deal of public attention. In my opinion, I totally agree with the above issues.
This
essay will explore more about the above problems. Admittedly, from a health researcher’s perspective, I agree with the point of view that
animals
are a necessary part of the
diet
. By eating
meat
from livestock and poultry , we understand how beneficial is
meat
which has a variety of proteins, liquids and other nutrients.
This
is because people need more nourishment to do jobs that require a lot of intelligence and health without these foods they may not have full development.
For example
, anaemic people need to add iron which can improve their health.
Thus
, doctors suggest they should eat more red
meat
like beef, pork, lamb,
etc
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etc.
which can increase the amount of blood in their body.
In addition
, from the perspective business person, using
animals
to sell has brought many big benefits to the economy. If consumers consume a lot of
meat
from
animals
, the economy of countries will be stronger. It is already predicted that a large proportion of companies will have too much profit from producing
meat
to ship to many areas in domestic and international countries.
Moreover
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those farmers create many job opportunities for low-quality workforce and reduce the rate of unemployment in these rural areas since they need a wide range of positions to carry out the efficient production processes which can make more profit for humans and areas. In conclusion, we can see no reason why livestock or other
animals
cannot be used as food.
Diet
choice is a personal decision you could choose an animal-free
diet
if you think killing
animals
for food is cruel. Personally, I felt that having
meat
for meals is a standard
diet
because it fits my
diet
and my growth.
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