the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housholds in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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possession

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of electrical devices and how much time

do

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the

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people at home

use

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them to do

house work

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housework

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in one specific country in six years. In the

first

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chart

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we can compare

percentage

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the percentage

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of

having

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apply

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washing

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machine

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machines

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,

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refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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between 1920 and 2019.The

refrigerator

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in the

first

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year with the negligible amount is the lowest percentage.

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,

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the dominion of the washing

machine

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in the highest with 40ration in 1920.

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, au three electrical appliances are having increase pattern. The

use

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of

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refrigerator

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refrigerators

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has

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apply

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picked

to

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up to

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100 percent in 1960 and

remain

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remained

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steady

to

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until

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the end of the period.

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, all the people

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use

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used

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vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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in 2000 after a

slightly

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rise during the

first

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four years. Meanwhile, the

ownerships

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ownership

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of washing

machine

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fluctuate. In the second

chart

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we can

observed

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that

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apply

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the number of

hours

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but

it

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apply

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decline

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declined

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to 20

hours

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in 1960.

Then

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/the

hours

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of spending per

house hold

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household

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not only

stay

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stayed

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around 10

hours

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but

also

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fall

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fell

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into the minimum usage in 2019.

Overall

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, The

use

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washing

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of washing

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machine

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machines

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is the maximum bonus in 1920 and

also

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the minimum clunk in 2019.

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,

people

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consumption of

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refrigerator

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is the

least

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lowest

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percentage of

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but in hit the chart

at the end

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.

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, the amount of time spent doing

house work

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housework

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has a

decreas

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decreased

pattern.