Many believe that people who have been in prison can become good citizens later, but there also people who believe ex-criminals will relapse sooner or later. Discuss both view and express your opinion?

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many are of the argument that ex-prisoners will re-offend sooner or later.
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there is indeed a strong case to be made for
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argument, my stance is that people who have been in
prison
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are entirely likely to be better residents later. On the one hand, people with a criminal record are probably not accepted by society. It can be explained by the fact that,
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prejudice, citizens in society may be scared of
ex-offender's
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ex-offenders
exposures and negative impacts, so they will stand away from people who used to be in
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.
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, neighbours living near an ex-convict's family tend to be cautious and diminish their communication with his or her family because they are afraid that the criminal behaviour of that ex-prisoner might emerge again.
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, there are more compelling reasons for the argument that ex-convicts can become good citizens. The first reason is that they are offered any number of different training programs,
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as vocational and interpersonal skill training, that can equip prisoners with the skills necessary for a job before completing their
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term. Another reason that can be considered is that rehabilitation programs and mental therapy conversations with psychologists during the
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period help them improve their positive behaviours and make the right choices in life.
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, ex-criminals will be able to avoid their anti-social behaviour,
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the negative prejudices of society towards them. In conclusion, despite the opinion of criminal commitment' relapse, I always believe that there are numerous ex-convicts who deserve a brighter and more hopeful life to become good citizens after their
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sentence.
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