The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

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The bar chart illustrates the level of
education
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of Bulgarian people who wanted to move and live in foreign countries between 2002 and 2008.
Overall
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, the percentage of primary and lower
education
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steadied and markedly increased
at the end
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of the
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,
while
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the majority of secondary
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steadied highly despite a little bit of a decrease over the
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, and higher
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had fluctuated over the
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given. Secondary
education
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started with a majority high rate of 65% in 2002,
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slightly fell over the
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, which was in 2006 and 2009, at 61% and 59%, respectively, but continued to keep the primary rate. Higher
education
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was 17% in 2002, rose approximately 20% in 2006, and dropped to 9% the next year. Primary and lower
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had significant changes over the
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. In 2002, the rate of primary and lower
education
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was 18%; it soared to just 19% in 2006 and increased dramatically by 13% in 2008.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • summarize
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