The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the level of
education
of Bulgarian people who wanted to move and live in foreign countries between 2002 and 2008.
Overall
, the percentage of primary and lower
education
steadied and markedly increased
at the end
of the
period
,
while
the majority of secondary
education
steadied highly despite a little bit of a decrease over the
period
, and higher
education
had fluctuated over the
period
given. Secondary
education
started with a majority high rate of 65% in 2002,
then
slightly fell over the
period
, which was in 2006 and 2009, at 61% and 59%, respectively, but continued to keep the primary rate. Higher
education
was 17% in 2002, rose approximately 20% in 2006, and dropped to 9% the next year. Primary and lower
education
had significant changes over the
period
. In 2002, the rate of primary and lower
education
was 18%; it soared to just 19% in 2006 and increased dramatically by 13% in 2008.
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  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
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