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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In some cultures,
children
 attempt to work hard to achieve everything that they want. I strongly believe that despite some virtues of
children
try
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who try
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 hard to obtain anything
such
 as
sense
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a sense
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 of satisfaction and motive
them
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apply
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to achieve anything, some
children
 experience
failures
 that they feel
depression
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. To commence with,
children
 are interested in achieving everything they want since they were born. They make efforts to obtain anything by doing hard work. Working hard can help
children
 to
gain
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achieve
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 their aims or everything they want faster.
This
 can assist
children
 to satisfy their
lives
 and
motive
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motivate
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 them to try harder.
For instance
, in the school,
children
 study hard to get
good
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a good
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 score from the teacher. Before exams, they more
consentrate
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concentrate
concentrated
 on their studies
instead
 of doing
favourite
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their favourite
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 activities, because they know that if they study hard, they will get
good
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a good
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score
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scores
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.
Therefore
, they spend
their
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most time
in
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studing
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studying
 to achieve their goals, and they experience
feeling
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a feeling
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 of satisfaction
,
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 and
continuing
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continue
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this
behavior
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behaviour
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 for their future
lives
. Because of that they can
also
 positive impact on
the
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apply
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society in the long run. On the flip side,
children
 decide to achieve everything they want by trying hard enough,
although
, sometimes they experience
failures
 that can influence
of
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children
’s notions. They feel
depression
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depressed
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 if they work hard and do not achieve their aims.
Therefore
, it is said that success and failure can have a direct effect on
children
’s feelings and even their future
lives
.
For example
, my cousin did puzzles and took part in many competitions. She tried hard to win and get top-rank among other competitors, but she failed one of the
constents
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contents
constants
, and after
that
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,that
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 she felt depressed for a long time. In conclusion,
although
 trying hard is one of the key factors
of
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in
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 achieving everything and
children
 feel happiness and satisfaction
to follow
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in following
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 their aims,
failures
 can have detrimental effects on
children
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children's
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 behaviours. We should not ignore the crucial role of
failures
 that can affect directly
on
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children
’s
lives
.
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