In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In some cultures,

children

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attempt to work hard to achieve everything that they want. I strongly believe that despite some virtues of

children

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try

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hard to obtain anything

such

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as

sense

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a sense

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of satisfaction and motive

them

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apply

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to achieve anything, some

children

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experience

failures

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that they feel

depression

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. To commence with,

children

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are interested in achieving everything they want since they were born. They make efforts to obtain anything by doing hard work. Working hard can help

children

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to

gain

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achieve

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their aims or everything they want faster.

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can assist

children

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to satisfy their

lives

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and

motive

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them to try harder.

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, in the school,

children

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study hard to get

good

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score from the teacher. Before exams, they more

consentrate

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concentrate

concentrated

on their studies

instead

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of doing

favourite

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their favourite

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activities, because they know that if they study hard, they will get

good

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a good

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score

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scores

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.

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, they spend

their

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apply

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most time

in

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apply

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studing

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studying

to achieve their goals, and they experience

feeling

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a feeling

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of satisfaction

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apply

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and

continuing

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continue

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behavior

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behaviour

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for their future

lives

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. Because of that they can

also

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positive impact on

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apply

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society in the long run. On the flip side,

children

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decide to achieve everything they want by trying hard enough,

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, sometimes they experience

failures

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that can influence

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apply

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children

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’s notions. They feel

depression

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depressed

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if they work hard and do not achieve their aims.

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, it is said that success and failure can have a direct effect on

children

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’s feelings and even their future

lives

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.

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, my cousin did puzzles and took part in many competitions. She tried hard to win and get top-rank among other competitors, but she failed one of the

constents

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contents

constants

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that

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she felt depressed for a long time. In conclusion,

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trying hard is one of the key factors

of

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in

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achieving everything and

children

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feel happiness and satisfaction

to follow

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in following

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their aims,

failures

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can have detrimental effects on

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children

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children's

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behaviours. We should not ignore the crucial role of

failures

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that can affect directly

on

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apply

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children

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’s

lives

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.