The number of plants and animals is declining. Describe some reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

It cannot be denied that the decrease of wild animals and trees is one of the pressing issues of the contemporary era. The increase in the world population, industrialization

as well

Linking Words

as

Correct word choice

and

show examples

some other crucial facts are associated with

this

Linking Words

trend. Necessary steps that are environment-friendly and focused on wildlife conservation are desperately needed. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons which are related to the extinction of forests and wildlife creatures.

Firstly

Linking Words

, all around the

world

Add a comma

,world

show examples

we are observing an insurgence of the human population

along with

Linking Words

that expectancy of people's life length. So the demand for habitation

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and household products

such

Linking Words

as furniture has increased.

As a result

Linking Words

, a significant amount of lands which are covered with trees and vegetation are cut down and colonized by the different agencies.

Secondly

Linking Words

,

although

Linking Words

the population rate has increased a lot, the number of jobs is limited. That's why many unemployed people illegally hunt wild animals and sell them to the black markets.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, because of illiteracy most of them are unaware of the negative consequences of their activities.

such

Linking Words

as

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

cutting down valuable green areas and hunting wild animals for profits. I would like to propose that sufficient knowledge about the environmental hazards of these heinous activities should be provided by the governments and associate authorities to the masses.

Further

Linking Words

steps like creating more jobs and facilities are

also

Linking Words

required.

Moreover

Linking Words

, many notorious industrial organizations do not want to think about the ecological imbalance and climate aspects of cutting down a significant amount of trees for the sake of industrialization and profits. The government should take legal steps against them to control the situation. In conclusion, my opinion is that unless governments and world leaders fail to take necessary measures and implement those programs the current situation will not change.