It is human nature that discover unknown situations. In the last decades, scientists have become more excited when reach the moon. This essay will discuss why people find this issue ridiculous despite scientist's arguments

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It is human nature that discover unknown situations. In the

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decades, scientists have become more excited when reach the moon.

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essay will discuss why individuals find

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issue ridiculous despite scientist's arguments scientists cross barriers to reach the moon and

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know it worthwhile approach despite ordinary

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agree. Some believe

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discovered place is not as good as it seems for some reasons.

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, authorities could invest in residence facilities which don'

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have an appropriate situation,

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,Guys who are residents in slums will be happier to achieve a budget for having a home than travelling to an unknown place.

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people

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tend to follow subjects that will enable them to have a personal experience as soon as possible so,

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unachievable activity wouldn'

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be attractive to them. another reason why individuals don'

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take into account important issues is that they don'

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have enough information about procedures and the future of that.in fact, the media doesn'

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support

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kind of related issues, an illustration of

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is, that ordinary

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get their information from the news and reports, when there aren'

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any specific details

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as who exactly reached them, what problems during

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project, what's the aim of

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journey,

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know the beneficial point of that.

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, all kinds of interests should be supported by the government when basic needs have been met and its better astronauts bring clear aims of

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project.

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task response

Make sure to address all parts of the essay prompt clearly. In this case, ensure that you discuss both why people might find space exploration ridiculous and why scientists still pursue it.

coherence cohesion

Improve logical sequence and paragraph transitions to enhance the essay's flow. Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas more clearly.

task response

Provide more specific examples and detailed explanations to back up your points. This makes your arguments more convincing and demonstrates deeper engagement with the topic.

introduction conclusion present

The introduction clearly states the topic and what the essay will cover, which is a good starting point.

supported main points

Both main body paragraphs address relevant points to support the essay's argument.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

240 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

exploration
curiosity
scientific advancements
space exploration
technological milestone
human ingenuity
public skepticism
waste of resources
pressing issues
conspiracy theories
educational impact
STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
ingenuity
significant achievement
inspire future generations

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It is human nature that discover unknown situations. In the last decades, scientists have become more excited when reach the moon. This essay will discuss why people find this issue ridiculous despite scientist's arguments

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In some countries ordinary citizens are allowed to keep a gun in their house. Some people think this is a good idea, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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