The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar graph illustrates information about
frequency
of eating habits at junk food Add an article
the frequency
place
among Fix the agreement mistake
places
people
in the United States from 2003 to 2013. Overall
, the highest trends
when Fix the agreement mistake
trend
people
eating
fast Wrong verb form
eat
snack
is within once a week and once or twice a month.
In 2003, the highest trend held Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
in
once a week which got more than 30% even though it is still not as high as in 2006 which more higher than all three different trends which got 33%. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, 2013 also
have
a peak season too which Wrong verb form
had
people
usually ate fast goodies once or twice a month at 33%.
However
, people
are rarely feed
comfort food Change the verb form
are rarely fed
everyday
in three different years Replace the word
every day
which
in 2003, 2006 and 2013, the percentage Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
under 5%. Wrong verb form
was
This
is also
true with people
who never ate convenience meal
, the data shows it is under 5% too, even though in 2006 and 2014, Fix the agreement mistake
meals
people
shows
the same percentage which at 4%.Wrong verb form
showed
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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