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The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
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The maps below illustrate visual data about the situation of a hospital and its
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 access in 2007 and 2010.
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, the parking area around the hospital has been expanded, and two roundabouts have been instructed near it. If we look at the map in 2007, we can see that the public and staff used to share a parking space, which was located between the city
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 and the ring
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 around the hospital . Over the next three years, on the eastern side of the hospital, a parking area was introduced for the public to use, and the former shared parking space has become staff-only. Another significant change is that two roundabouts have been constructed, one where the hospital
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 used to cross the city
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, and one where it used to cross the ring
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. In 2007, all bus stations used to be situated next to the hospital
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, and there were not any particular areas for all of them. Looking at the map in 2010, it is evident that all of them have been moved to a specific area on the southwestern side of the hospital.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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