The maps below show changes in the art galery between in 2005 and today

The maps describe how the first floor of art has changed since 2005. In 2005, the

gallery

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had 4

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rooms in total, 3 of which lined up on the east side,

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the other was to the left of the porch. Directly facing the passageway was a round reception counter, immediately before the stairs in the north wing. A café could be in the northwest corner, with a

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office to its south. The

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's ground floor has seen some major changes over the years.

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the

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rooms along the east side remain intact, the fourth

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room has been repurposed into a temporary

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and a children’s area. The reception counter has been relocated to the centre, and it now faces the newly-built avenue hall by the staircase. The café and

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office have

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been converted into a

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shop and an area for a vending machine.

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, accessibility of the

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has greatly improved with the addition of a lift by the stairs and a ramp for wheel wheelchairs to the left of the entrance.

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, the art

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has been made more convenient with the addition of new facilities

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as a children’s area and a

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shop, albeit at the expense of some old features. Of particular note is the construction of a ramp for wheelchairs and a lift, which has made the

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more accessible to the disabled.

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The maps below show changes in the art galery between in 2005 and today

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? How government should encourage people to reduce using

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion