The maps below show changes in the art galery between in 2005 and today

The maps below show changes in the art galery between in 2005 and today
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The maps describe how the first floor of art has changed since 2005. In 2005, the
gallery
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had 4
exhibition
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rooms in total, 3 of which lined up on the east side,
while
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the other was to the left of the porch. Directly facing the passageway was a round reception counter, immediately before the stairs in the north wing. A café could be in the northwest corner, with a
gallery
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office to its south. The
gallery
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's ground floor has seen some major changes over the years.
Although
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the
exhibition
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rooms along the east side remain intact, the fourth
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room has been repurposed into a temporary
exhibition
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and a children’s area. The reception counter has been relocated to the centre, and it now faces the newly-built avenue hall by the staircase. The café and
gallery
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office have
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been converted into a
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shop and an area for a vending machine.
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, accessibility of the
gallery
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has greatly improved with the addition of a lift by the stairs and a ramp for wheel wheelchairs to the left of the entrance.
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, the art
gallery
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has been made more convenient with the addition of new facilities
such
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as a children’s area and a
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shop, albeit at the expense of some old features. Of particular note is the construction of a ramp for wheelchairs and a lift, which has made the
gallery
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more accessible to the disabled.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gallery, exhibition with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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