The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The bar chart illustrates the total proportion of males and females who participated in the Olympic competitions from 1920 to 2012,
on the other hand
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, the line graph depicts a growth of the rates in general. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that both women's and men's numbers increased steadily until the final year, and male figures predominated throughout the period. In 1924, rates for men were leading the data exactly at 3000 and
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statistic peaked almost at 6000 in 2012,
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women's number stood at around 100 in the first year before a huge rise to 1500 in 1984.
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,
although
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it barely went up three times to about 3000 in 2012, it was still lower than the men's data. As for total participants in 1924,
this
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began at 2400,
then
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almost doubled and steadily grew until 1984 at over 6000 before increasing considerably to 12000 in the
last
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year.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Olympic Games
  • participants
  • historical context
  • trend
  • exponential growth
  • influence
  • world events
  • diversity
  • technological advancements
  • global
  • gender equality
  • International Olympic Committee (IOC)
  • unity
  • competition
  • athletes
  • entry
  • represent
  • delegation
  • boycotts
  • milestones
  • parity
  • inclusive
  • disciplines
  • legacy
  • sponsorship
  • admission
  • elite sportspeople
  • national pride
  • cultural exchange
  • ambassadors
  • sportsmanship
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