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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause seroius social problems ,as well as practical problems .to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause seroius social problems ,as well as practical problems .to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Living in a foreign country where you have to communicate with people in another speech sounds difficult to the majority of crowds and they assume they will face some difficulty in their daily life
due to
 the novel accent they have to speak. From my perspective ,living in a new area needs some awareness about the culture
as well as
 the
language
 to get used to the environment more easily. I totally agree that if you don'
t
 know the spoken
language
 in the destination country you will face many trouble
such
 as being unable to have conversations with local people and not even having the chance to get a suitable job for yourself.
For instance
, about three years ago my cousin immigrated to us without any knowledge of English
consequently
 she wasn'
t
 able to even buy her necessary stuff for a living and couldn'
t
 get familiar with the neighbours at first . Right now I am
also
 choosing to continue my education in Europe,so to become independent and able to do things on my own I'm taking some English classes .
otherwise
, I may tackle problems like my cousin. In conclusion,if you don'
t
 know the
language
 of the new country you will deal with many issues
such
 as socialising with others .
In addition
, you can'
t
 do anything as you are not able to communicate with people
thus
 they may misunderstand and take insults
thus
 ,they become mad at you.
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 said that,if you try to learn the basics of the new
language
 these issues won'
t
 be serious problems for you .
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