The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter, say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party explain why you won’t be able to attend the party give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time Write at least 150 words.
Dear Alex,
Hope
this
finds you well. I am glad to know that you make
Wrong verb form
have made
your
mind Change preposition
up your
for
learning physical activity. Change preposition
about
According to
my humble opinion, I suggest you Change preposition
In
to
learn badminton as Remove the particle
apply
stadium
is Add an article
the stadium
nearby
your residence.
Correct your spelling
near
Moreover
, there are special offers going on at MT Stadium
due to
summer vacation. You can visit the stadium
and opt for trainer
Fix the agreement mistake
trainers
according to
your availability and budget. In addition
, my friend from school has an Olympic certificate in badminton who can assist you with the sport and diet. If you are planning to join stadium
on weekends Correct article usage
the stadium
than
I can join you to learn badminton and we can spend more time Correct your spelling
then
due to
this
leisure activity. We will be physical
fit and healthy together.
Looking forward Change the word
physically
for
your positive response. If you need any other Change preposition
to
advise
, kindly let me know.
Best Regards,
DavidReplace the word
advice
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite