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You need to translate a document into a different language, and you have a friend who speaks that language. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain what the document is why you need a translation - Explain why this is urgent and important to you - Ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help you

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Hello Alison I hope you are doing well. I am writing to seek a favour from you. I am glad to tell you that I have reserved my place at Queens University, Montreal, and I am planning to move there next month. I have recently finalised a rented apartment for my stay in Montreal, and my prospective landlord has given me a lease agreement, which is in French language, to sign within a week . As you know, I always have a hard time
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reading French so I need you to translate that into English for me. I know that French is your first language, and you have a good command not only
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 French but English as well. If you facilitate me in translating, I can understand the terms and conditions of living in that apartment
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 I may get into a trap as well since there has been an increase in scams
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 the name of renting houses. Please let me know as soon as possible if you can help me in translating the letter. Eagerly waiting for your reply Best regards Gurjot Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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