Some countries owning home rather than renting. Do you think this is Negative or Positive

Many

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countries's

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countries'

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people

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trend

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tend

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to buy their own

house

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rather than

reting

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renting

resting

in many

countries

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. I believe that buying

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house

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or apartment is

huge

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hugely

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beneficial for

people

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's

life

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.

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, some

people

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think that it is better to

rent

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living

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a living

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area because of flexible

depend

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depending

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on their

life

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situations

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situation

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. Some

countries

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believe that renting

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house

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a house

the house

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is more

convienent

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convenient

and flexible

depend

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depending

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on

people

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's

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life style

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lifestyle

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.

Nowdays

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Nowadays

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, there are various kinds of families or single in the world. So, many young

people

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prefer to

rent

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house

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a house

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or apartment

rely

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depending

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on their situation which

are

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is

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their

financial

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finances

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, job, and taste.

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, many

people

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work

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in another

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another

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other

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contries

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countries

from leaving their country so

people

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more

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apply

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prefer to

rent

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which

mean

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means

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this

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is very

convienent

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convenient

than

owing

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owning

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house

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a house

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.

Antoher

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In other

case

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cases

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, many

people

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who

living

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live

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alone do not want to buy

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house

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a house

the house

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because they want to invest the money

for

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in

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their

life

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quality like

trip

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trips

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, clothes, and

stock

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stocks

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that enhance their own value

rathen

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rather

than increasing their possession which

are

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is

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house

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houses

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, land,

gold

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and gold

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.

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, some

countries

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recommend owning

people

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's

possesstion

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possession

possessions

which

mean

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means

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house

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a house

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or apartment

due to

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people

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's reliable

life

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. If

people

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have

a

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an

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own

their

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apply

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home, their

life

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would be more reliable and relaxing before

reting

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renting

resting

house

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. The reason why they do not need to move the other

house

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,

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also

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is also

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they

dacorate

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decorate

decorated

their

house

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own

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on

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their taste.

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,

people

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who have

own

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their own

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house

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can decorate and

renovation

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renovate

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their

house

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more

beautifuly

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beautiful

beautifully

,

although

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they have to spend lots of money but it is kind of investing for own so it is valuable and worthy. In conclusion,

various

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in various

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countries's

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countries

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people

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rent

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house

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a house

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rathen

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rather

than buying their

place

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own place

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,

however

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, I would like to say investing to buy

own

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their own

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house

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is more

worthy

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worthwhile

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and one of

best

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the best

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way

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ways

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to live more comfortably.