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Some countries owning home rather than renting. Do you think this is Negative or Positive

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Many
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countries's
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countries'
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people
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trend
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tend
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 to buy their own
house
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 rather than
reting
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renting
resting
 in many
countries
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. I believe that buying
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house
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a house
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 or apartment is
huge
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hugely
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 beneficial for
people
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's
life
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.
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, some
people
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 think that it is better to
rent
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living
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a living
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 area because of flexible
depend
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depending
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 on their
life
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situations
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situation
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. Some
countries
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 believe that renting
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house
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a house
the house
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 is more
convienent
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convenient
 and flexible
depend
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depending
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 on
people
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's
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life style
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lifestyle
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.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
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, there are various kinds of families or single in the world. So, many young
people
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 prefer to
rent
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house
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a house
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 or apartment
rely
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depending
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 on their situation which
are
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is
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 their
financial
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finances
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, job, and taste.
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, many
people
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 work
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in another
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another
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other
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contries
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countries
 from leaving their country so
people
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more
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apply
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prefer to
rent
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 which
mean
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means
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this
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 is very
convienent
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convenient
 than
owing
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owning
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house
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a house
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.
Antoher
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case
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cases
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, many
people
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 who
living
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live
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 alone do not want to buy
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house
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a house
the house
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 because they want to invest the money
for
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in
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 their
life
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 quality like
trip
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trips
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, clothes, and
stock
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stocks
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 that enhance their own value
rathen
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rather
 than increasing their possession which
are
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is
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house
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houses
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, land,
gold
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and gold
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.
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, some
countries
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 recommend owning
people
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's
possesstion
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possession
possessions
 which
mean
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means
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house
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a house
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 or apartment
due to
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people
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's reliable
life
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. If
people
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 have
a
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an
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 own
their
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apply
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home, their
life
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 would be more reliable and relaxing before
reting
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renting
resting
house
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. The reason why they do not need to move the other
house
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,
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also
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is also
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 they
dacorate
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decorate
decorated
 their
house
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own
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on
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 their taste.
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,
people
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 who have
own
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their own
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house
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 can decorate and
renovation
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renovate
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 their
house
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 more
beautifuly
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beautiful
beautifully
,
although
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 they have to spend lots of money but it is kind of investing for own so it is valuable and worthy. In conclusion,
various
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in various
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countries's
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countries
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people
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rent
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house
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a house
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rathen
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rather
 than buying their
place
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own place
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,
however
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, I would like to say investing to buy
own
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their own
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house
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 is more
worthy
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worthwhile
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 and one of
best
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the best
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way
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ways
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 to live more comfortably.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mortgage
  • equity
  • property ladder
  • real estate
  • investment
  • asset
  • debt
  • appreciation
  • depreciation
  • interest rates
  • tenure
  • down payment
  • foreclosure
  • gentrification
  • urban sprawl
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • property tax
  • zoning laws
  • subprime lending
  • equity loan
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