Some countries owning home rather than renting. Do you think this is Negative or Positive
Many
countries's
Remove the s
countries'
people
trend
to buy their own Correct your spelling
tend
house
rather than reting
in many Correct your spelling
renting
resting
countries
. I believe that buying house
or apartment is Correct article usage
a house
huge
beneficial for Change the adjective
hugely
people
's life
. However
, some people
think that it is better to rent
living
area because of flexible Correct article usage
a living
depend
on their Wrong verb form
depending
life
situations
.
Some Fix the agreement mistake
situation
countries
believe that renting house
is more Add an article
a house
the house
convienent
and flexible Correct your spelling
convenient
depend
on Change the form of the verb
depending
people
's life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Nowdays
, there are various kinds of families or single in the world. So, many young Correct the word
Nowadays
people
prefer to rent
house
or apartment Correct article usage
a house
rely
on their situation which Verb problem
depending
are
their Change the verb form
is
financial
, job, and taste. Replace the word
finances
For example
, many people
work Change preposition
in another
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
contries
from leaving their country so Correct your spelling
countries
people
more
prefer to Correct quantifier usage
apply
rent
which mean
Correct subject-verb agreement
means
this
is very convienent
than Correct your spelling
convenient
owing
Correct your spelling
owning
house
. Correct article usage
a house
Antoher
Correct your spelling
In other
case
, many Fix the agreement mistake
cases
people
who living
alone do not want to buy Wrong verb form
live
house
because they want to invest the money Add an article
a house
the house
for
their Change preposition
in
life
quality like trip
, clothes, and Fix the agreement mistake
trips
stock
that enhance their own value Fix the agreement mistake
stocks
rathen
than increasing their possession which Correct your spelling
rather
are
Change the verb form
is
house
, land, Fix the agreement mistake
houses
gold
.
Correct word choice
and gold
On the other hand
, some countries
recommend owning people
's possesstion
which Correct your spelling
possession
possessions
mean
Correct subject-verb agreement
means
house
or apartment Correct article usage
a house
due to
people
's reliable life
. If people
have a
own Change the article
an
their
home, their Correct pronoun usage
apply
life
would be more reliable and relaxing before reting
Correct your spelling
renting
resting
house
. The reason why they do not need to move the other house
, also
they Add a missing verb
is also
dacorate
their Correct your spelling
decorate
decorated
house
own
their taste. Correct your spelling
on
For instance
, people
who have own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
house
can decorate and renovation
their Replace the word
renovate
house
more beautifuly
, Correct your spelling
beautiful
beautifully
although
they have to spend lots of money but it is kind of investing for own so it is valuable and worthy.
In conclusion, various
Change preposition
in various
countries's
Change noun form
countries
people
rent
house
Correct article usage
a house
rathen
than buying their Correct your spelling
rather
place
, Correct word choice
own place
however
, I would like to say investing to buy own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
house
is more worthy
and one of Replace the word
worthwhile
best
Add an article
the best
way
to live more comfortably.Fix the agreement mistake
ways
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