The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map of A and B show how a movie
theater
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has developed over the
last
40 years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation,
cinema
studio expansion, and the introduction of a DVD shop. In 1980, on the left side of the entrance where the
Cinema
One was there previously.
on
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the right side of the entrance were the Ticket and the Drinks
station
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stations
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located. On the other side of the ticket and drink booth was the square-shaped
Cinema
2. In front of
Cinema
2 has always been a toilet. Next to
this
was a car park. Turning to the present-day map, it can be seen that the car park has gone, being replaced by two movie
theaters
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. The toilet remains, as does the ticket booth.
Cinema
1 was replaced by the drinks station, which now provides food too,
although
it did not have it before, and
relax
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room facility was added next to it. Having been converted into three
cinema
studios, the square-shaped
Cinema
2 has now gone,
while
the previously situated drinks station has been replaced by a DVD shop.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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