The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002.

The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002.
The given diagram illustrates how gold
sales
in Dubai fluctuated over a period of 12 months.
Overall
, gold
sales
in Dubai remained relatively unchanged in 2002. It is observed that in the first month of 2002, gold
sales
stood at 200
million
dirhams
and rose slightly to reach about 225
million
in February.
This
was followed by another increase,
although
much steeper, in March when
sales
were almost 125
million
dirhams
higher than in February.
However
,
this
upward trend was suddenly broken and
sales
plummeted dramatically over the next 4 months to reach a little over 100
million
dirhams
in July. August
sales
showed a significant rise back to January levels as figures nearly doubled, but
this
was not to
last
as they dropped again in September to the same level as they were in July. October came with a small increase of about 100
million
dirhams
in
sales
, after which
sales
figures levelled off and remained relatively static over the
last
two months of 2002.
To sum up
,
sales
were at their highest in March
while
the weakest
sales
figures could be observed in July and September.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million, dirhams with synonyms.
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