In many countries, school children are required to wear school uniforms Do you think this should be enforced in all schools?

Owing to the cut-throat competition, people tend to give equal education to their offspring. There is a tendency to wear

school

uniforms

in most countries in the world. I would argue that

this

should be applied

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all schools

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because it brings about

equality

among

children

and mitigates many social evils

such

as

child

abuse

. There are many benefits to wearing

school

uniforms

.

Firstly

,

this

gives

equality

. If all students wear the same clothes, it will give

equality

among them, because they wear the same materials and the same fashion.

Moreover

,

due to

economic

issues

, some pupils cannot purchase

high quality

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outfits, but some can.

For instance

,

according to

a recent research which was done by the social department of the University of Colombo, it reveals that 89% of

children

suffer from buying expensive clothes.

Therefore

, wearing a

school

uniform can be deemed as a boon.

Secondly

, if there are no restrictions on wearing clothes for

school

children

, it will influence society as well. Because

children

are more inclined to wear up-market dresses. To be more precise, if there is

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uniform,

children

tend to wear as they wish.

This

results in many social

issues

and

this

tendency thoroughly influences

child

abuse

.

For instance

, a well-known published article showed that schools which are allowed to wear vivid kinds of outfits for their pupils

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many problems

such

as mental disorders and

child

abuse

.

Hence

, by wearing

uniforms

, these

issues

can be mitigated. In conclusion,

school

uniforms

can be seen in many countries. I reckon it brings about many merits

such

as

equality

between rich and impoverishment and it can be alleviated many social

issues

like

child

abuse

. It is recommended that the government should subsidize

school

uniform materials for all

school

children

and impose apt (suitable)

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for all schools to wear

uniforms

.

Then

it can be beneficiated to impoverished students and

school

children

can refrain from many social evils.