Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own options.

In recent years,some people have believed that the main environmental issue nowadays is particular

creatures

are slowly disappearing.But ,I disagree

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point,

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essay will discuss what the biggest environmental problem

and

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give my own opinions. There are some factors which lead to some

creatures

disappear

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.First of all,I strongly believe that the main

reason

is most

week

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animals

are killed by strong wildlife.For the rules of

forest

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,if

animals

and plants do not have any

abilities

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to protect themselves, they might be killed .

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,50 years ago,the number of wild sheep

which

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live in the mountains had a sharp decrease ，the

reason

is that many

wolfs

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eat them.What’s more ,

other

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reason

is that civilians hunt too many.If

hunter

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hunters

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kill valuable

creatures

,it might lead to some

creatures

dying out. Rules of forest and hunters kill

animals

too many

result

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in

animals

and plants gradually disappearing,and yet the biggest environmental problem is the pollution of human

beings

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activities.

This

pollution could produce many carbon emissions.

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,if

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large carbon emissions into the atmosphere,it might lead to climate change.

Moreover

,the climate change results in extreme weather,

such

as drought .And many

virus

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appear in these

weltering

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sweltering

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environment

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environments

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.

This

is the terrible chain

affairs

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.

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,in recent years,there are many regions

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outbreak

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of

virus

infection,the main

reason

is that extreme weather give some

virus

life conditions.

Additionally

,

this

virus

might kill

animals

and plants. In conclusion,I disagree that the main problem of the environment is the loss of particular

creatures

.The most significant issue is pollution and climate change, if people do not do anything to solve these problems,we might face less food and

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terrible environment and disasters.