The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
The pie chart and the table illustrate the tourists from various regions in a particular holiday resort in Australia.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that the majority of the visitors were from Asia, whereas
the smallest portion is from tourists from other parts of the world.
In more detail, visitors from Asia stay for only about a week in a hotel
doing sightseeing, while
people from the US do the same thing, but the only difference is that they stay for at least 10 days. Both prefer to stay in a hotel
. Asians prefer a 4-start hotel
, while
Americans stay at a 5-start hotel
, respectively.
On the other hand
, Europeans stay the longest for approximately 16 days, whilst enjoying camping or caravan. Moreover
, their main activity is either swimming or sunbathing, the same as foreigners from other regions. However
, their main activity is mostly surfing.Submitted by Anneya
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