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Nowadays, online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Discuss the positive and negative aspects of online shopping and give your own opinion about the topic.

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It has always been argued that these days the majority of individuals prefer to do cybershopping as compared to offline. In my opinion, it is a welcome development and
this
 essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. Foremost, why online shopping is popular nowadays?
This
 is because it saves
time
. In
this
 day and age, most humans are hectic in their
life
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, so they do not have enough
time
 to purchase something from markets as it consumes more
time
, but electronic shopping is an optimal way
people
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 may order any item within a few minutes without going anywhere.
Besides
this
, home shopping provide discount on every good with the assistance of
this
 commoners can secure their capital for other work. For
insatance
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instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that (2022) in India 65% of human beings are going
to
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web shopping because
people
busy
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 in their
life
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along
with
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it gives
products
in
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at
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 lower
price
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prices
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. Paradoxically, in-store shopping is the best option for those who might do it as
people
 can check the quality of
products
 with
this
 they could save from
scammer
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 because
in
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this
modren
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modern
 era, there
are
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number
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a number
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 of
fake
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 online
platform
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platforms
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 available which
delivered
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wrong
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products
 to their customers.
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, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 45% of the population got bad
qualitiy
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quality
 items from some websites now they love to do shopping
from
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 stores and markets.
To conclude
,
although
 offline shopping is a better thing for
people
 it gives opportunities to check
products
 deeply, I personally believe that online shopping provides more facilities
such
 as a discount on every item and saves precious
time
.
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