the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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The plan provides information about the current appearance of the town of Norbiton and its

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development. Looking from the

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perspective it is readily apparent that the area will experience significant changes,

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, some streets are not planned to be altered. With regards to the present form, there is a long river located on the north side of the layout.

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, there is a roundabout in the centre which is surrounded by several factories.

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, there are only two main roads built on the south side and in the middle of the plan.

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the future map, a new road which will divide a river will be constructed perpendicular to previous ones.

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, a medical centre and a few shops will be established around the roundabout,

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a new one will be located more southern. It is

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noticeable that a big school and a playground will be built on the eastern side,

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, all factories will be replaced by housing.

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the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

In many countries, people are now living longer than before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

The plans give information about changes in a student accommodation.

The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolcate is produced from cocoa beans

In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?