the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart gives information about the
percentage
of the consequence of a survey on buying and drinking habits of
coffee
and
tea
in five
cities
in Australia in the
last
4 weeks.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
percentage
of city residents who went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
ranks first in four
cities
,
while
that of Adelaide stands second.
In addition
, in all
cities
, the
percentage
of city residents stands
last
in buying fresh
coffee
. Melbourne residents have the biggest proportion of going to the café for
coffee
and
tea
with approximately 63%, followed by Horbat with just above 62%. It is noteworthy that Adelaide ranks
last
with almost 50%. The highest
percentage
of instance
coffee
is allocated to Horbat with almost 55%, followed by Brisbane with 53%.
Although
the share of occupants of Sydney buying instant
coffee
is the lowest proportion among other
cities
at about 45%, it has the highest share in buying fresh
coffee
at almost 45%.
In addition
, there is no difference between the share of Adelaide and Brisbane in going to a café for
coffee
or
tea
,
while
that for the latter is about 35%.
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