The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph shows how many
tourists
visited a particular Caribbean Use synonyms
island
from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visiting a Caribbean Use synonyms
island
and staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
or the Use synonyms
island
increased gradually over 7 years. Use synonyms
In addition
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who were staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
or the Use synonyms
island
experienced a dramatic rise.
In 2010, the Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
was 0.5 Use synonyms
million
, and Use synonyms
then
it increased to 0.5 Linking Words
million
in 2011. At the beginning of the period, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
was 1.5 Use synonyms
million
and Use synonyms
then
it remained constant until 2011. Linking Words
Although
the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
increased slightly to almost 1.4 Use synonyms
million
in 2012, that for Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
declined to its initial Use synonyms
number
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
tourists
in both types of staying had a gradual increase until 2013, Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
continued its growth to reach 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
remained stable between 2013 and 2015 at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
.
It is noteworthy that the Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
overtook that for Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
in the middle of 2015, after that the Use synonyms
number
of the former experienced a slight increase to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, from 2010 to 2015, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
increased moderately from 1 to just over 2.5 Use synonyms
million
, before it experienced a dramatic increase for the final year to reach its peak at 3.5 Use synonyms
million
, it remained stable at about 2.7 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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