The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph shows how many
tourists
visited a particular Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of tourists
visiting a Caribbean island
and staying on cruise
ships
or the island
increased gradually over 7 years. In addition
, the total number
of visitors
who were staying on cruise
ships
or the island
experienced a dramatic rise.
In 2010, the figure
for tourists
who stayed on cruise
ships
was 0.5 million
, and then
it increased to 0.5 million
in 2011. At the beginning of the period, the number
of visitors
who stayed on the island
was 1.5 million
and then
it remained constant until 2011. Although
the figure
for visitors
who stayed on the island
increased slightly to almost 1.4 million
in 2012, that for visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
declined to its initial number
. Moreover
, the figure
for tourists
in both types of staying had a gradual increase until 2013, then
the number
of visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
continued its growth to reach 2 million
in 2017, while
the figure
for tourists
who stayed on the island
remained stable between 2013 and 2015 at 1.5 million
.
It is noteworthy that the figure
for visitors
who stayed on the island
overtook that for visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
in the middle of 2015, after that the number
of the former experienced a slight increase to 1.5 million
. Furthermore
, from 2010 to 2015, the total number
of visitors
increased moderately from 1 to just over 2.5 million
, before it experienced a dramatic increase for the final year to reach its peak at 3.5 million
, it remained stable at about 2.7 million
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