The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph shows how many
tourists
visited a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of
tourists
visiting a Caribbean
island
and staying on
cruise
ships
or the
island
increased gradually over 7 years.
In addition
, the total
number
of
visitors
who were staying on
cruise
ships
or the
island
experienced a dramatic rise. In 2010, the
figure
for
tourists
who stayed on
cruise
ships
was 0.5
million
, and
then
it increased to 0.5
million
in 2011. At the beginning of the period, the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on the
island
was 1.5
million
and
then
it remained constant until 2011.
Although
the
figure
for
visitors
who stayed on the
island
increased slightly to almost 1.4
million
in 2012, that for
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
declined to its initial
number
.
Moreover
, the
figure
for
tourists
in both types of staying had a gradual increase until 2013,
then
the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
continued its growth to reach 2
million
in 2017,
while
the
figure
for
tourists
who stayed on the
island
remained stable between 2013 and 2015 at 1.5
million
. It is noteworthy that the
figure
for
visitors
who stayed on the
island
overtook that for
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
in the middle of 2015, after that the
number
of the former experienced a slight increase to 1.5
million
.
Furthermore
, from 2010 to 2015, the total
number
of
visitors
increased moderately from 1 to just over 2.5
million
, before it experienced a dramatic increase for the final year to reach its peak at 3.5
million
, it remained stable at about 2.7
million
.
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  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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