The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph shows how many
tourists
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visited a particular Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of
tourists
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visiting a Caribbean
island
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and staying on
cruise
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ships
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or the
island
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increased gradually over 7 years.
In addition
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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who were staying on
cruise
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ships
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or the
island
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experienced a dramatic rise. In 2010, the
figure
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for
tourists
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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was 0.5
million
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, and
then
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it increased to 0.5
million
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in 2011. At the beginning of the period, the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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was 1.5
million
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and
then
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it remained constant until 2011.
Although
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the
figure
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for
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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increased slightly to almost 1.4
million
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in 2012, that for
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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declined to its initial
number
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.
Moreover
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, the
figure
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for
tourists
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in both types of staying had a gradual increase until 2013,
then
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the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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continued its growth to reach 2
million
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in 2017,
while
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the
figure
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for
tourists
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who stayed on the
island
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remained stable between 2013 and 2015 at 1.5
million
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. It is noteworthy that the
figure
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for
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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overtook that for
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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in the middle of 2015, after that the
number
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of the former experienced a slight increase to 1.5
million
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.
Furthermore
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, from 2010 to 2015, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased moderately from 1 to just over 2.5
million
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, before it experienced a dramatic increase for the final year to reach its peak at 3.5
million
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, it remained stable at about 2.7
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, cruise, ships, visitors, figure, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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