The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
table
depicts that the figure of visitors
to Ashdown Museum surged after the renovation. The presented table
shows the numerical values before and after the refurbishment. The pie chart reveals whether the renovation project was successful or not.
Overall
, the flow of visitors
to the museum gradually increased and the data from the table
and pie chart explores the review is better from the side of visitors
’ side after recreation works.
As is presented in the table
, the total number of visitors
before refurbishment was 74,000. Also
, from the surveys it is obvious that the dissatisfied opinions are nearly 40 per cent, following
very dissatisfied at 10 per cent.
Wrong verb form
followed by
According to
the year after refurbishment details, the number of visitors
as well as
the review of satisfied comments from guest
, ultimately at the peak in the history of Ashdown Museum. Fix the agreement mistake
guests
Furthermore
, all the percentages related to dissatisfaction are reduced after the renovation works.Submitted by devika.mohanan on
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