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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country
The
fisrt
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first
 chart shows us how much percentage does
people
use
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used
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 electrical appliances
on
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for
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housework
 between 1920 to 2019.
Additionally
, the second chart shows us how many
hours
does
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do
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people
spent
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spend
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 on
housework
everyweek
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every week
. All the percentage of
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the household
a household
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household
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households
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 which
using
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use
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electrical
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the electrical
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product
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products
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 had
increasely
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increased
increasingly
 tendency in almost 100
years
. Only
form
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from
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 1960 to 1980
decreasment
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decrease
tempeporly
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Temperley
. In 1980, doing household with
refrigerator
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a refrigerator
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 had
attached
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apply
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100
percentages
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per cent
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 and 20
years
 later doing chores with
vacuum
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a vacuum
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 cleaner
also
 attached
to
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apply
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100
percentages
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per cent
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 and 70
percentages
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per cent of
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people
using
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used
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 washing
machine
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machines
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 to do
housework
.
Moreover
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,Moreover
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 the
numebrs
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numbers
number
 of
people
 spent on doing
housework
are
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is
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constanrly
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constantly
decreased
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decreasing
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. It dropped off almost 40
hours
 per week in almost 100
years
. Because
of
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apply
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the
percentages
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percentage
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 of
people
 using most
electrically
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electrical
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 appliances
get
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was
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 100 in 1980 and 2000 the line got more flat
in
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from
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 1980 to 2019 rather than the line in the past 60
years
. Maybe if the washing machine
get
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gets
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 100
percentages
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per cent
show examples
use
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apply
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the number of
hours
using
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used
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 on
housework
 can
less
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be less
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 than 10
hours
 a week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, housework, hours, years, percentages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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