A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: thank him for the invitation mention why you can not attend the birthday party offer to meet him some other day

#friend #lives #city #daughter #birthday #invitation #party #offer

Dear friend, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I wanted to thank you for inviting me to your sweet daughter's birthday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the birthday party and I will be missing the day for sure. I will make sure I attend the next birthday party. I am having my workshop organized by the company later

this

week. I am hoping that it will

last

for two weeks.

This

workshop is very important for me and it will eventually help me in my office work. I wish I could do anything to make it possible. I hope you will understand my situation.

Also

, I am planning to pay a visit to your place by the end of

this

month.

This

way we can meet and enjoy our days in the northern hills. I am very positive to hear good news from your side soon. Eagerly, waiting for your response. Regards, Ahsan Ali

Submitted by ahsanaly.94 on Sun Aug 27 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

157 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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