In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, more and more
people
choose to read books and watch TV shows about the different types of
crime
. I think
this
happens because individuals want to get the sharp sensations in their ordinary lives.
Then
it comes to me, I prefer something more positive and romantic
instead
of
this
genre. I reckon that the popularity of
crime
novels and TV shows, especially in developed countries, can be explained by the willingness of
people
to deep into another dangerous and exciting world.
In other words
, some residents lack strong emotions in their quiet and peaceful lives.
Moreover
, most of them become addicted to
this
way of unwinding.
For instance
, elderly
people
don't miss any series of their favourite television
crime
dramas or they read all volumes of books about murders and their investigations. Despite the fact that criminal fiction and
movies
are widespread in today's world, I am not a fan of
this
trend. I used to like
movies
about bank robberies when I was younger but I prefer romantic stories and psychological dramas with an interesting plot now.
Besides
, I like to enjoy the family
movies
I could watch with my children. Namely, there are films that can teach them something kind or useful, and the characters have to be good role models for my sons. Taking everything into account, it can be concluded that
crime
fiction and TV
crime
dramas are becoming more and more popular globally.
People
consider them as entertainment and a way of getting thrills in their boring lives.
However
, I do not find
this
genre of literature or cinema exciting for me because I tend to read books and watch
movies
which give me positive emotions only.
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task response
Your essay adequately addresses the topic, but it could benefit from a more balanced discussion of both the reasons for the popularity of crime novels and TV crime dramas and your personal opinion.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of your essay is somewhat unclear. Ensure that your ideas are presented in a more organized and coherent manner, with clear transitions between paragraphs.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
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  • In a nutshell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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