It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the disappearance of a myriad of

animals

has become a serious problem for human beings, which soon will lead to a lack of food and resources.

While

there are a number of notions believing that our community must protect the animal

species

from extinction, other views think that there is no need to take any action because it is a natural process. In my point of view, I strongly agree with the former rather than the latter.

Firstly

, despite the fact that most of the ancient

animals

were all extinct

due to

the cause volcanic eruption, there

are

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numerous

species

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became rarer and decreased

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population significantly in humans. Take the

rhinos

as an example, In the past,

people

believed that rhino horns could work as a great medicine that would cure humans of many diseases

such

as cancer, lungs and so on,

although

in ,reality these horns had a similar composition which was coming from the human nails.

However

, in spite of scientists having proved it as a truth, many

people

are still addicted to hunting down

rhinos

for their horns. The implication of

this

was the dramatic decrease in the rhino population, which led

rhinos

to the endangered

species

list. For years, not only

rhinos

but, there were

also

plenty of

animals

that have already become extinct, of ,course human beings are the main reason for

this

and it is critical for us to take responsibility for their disappearances. Viewed from different sides,

according to

research,

due to

the immediate change of a particular habitat, a multitude of

species

suffer and die rapidly because of not being able to adapt to the new environment.

Moreover

, a natural food cycle could

also

lead to the disappearance of an animal. On second thought, these are just rare situations, that mostly never happen. The fact that our development has affected noticeably to the mother of nature.

For example

, transportation releases gas, which pollutes the air,

besides

,

people

throw plastic into rivers and oceans leading to the death of marine

species

.

Thus

, nowadays, many

people

hunt

animals

down for entertainment or to make money from their skins, meats and so on. In conclusion,

although

animals

might be dead

due to

their change of habitats, it is crucial for humanity to take action as soon as possible to protect these

species

from their disappearances.