You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the problems • what you would like him/her to do.
Hello Sir,
I hope you are doing well. I am Simran your new tenant who moved in
last
month with a family. This
letter is to bring your attention to one or two issues that we are facing in the house.
The taps in the rental unit are really giving us a hard time because of leaking water our utility bill is also
reaching peaks. We have mentioned this
while
moving in as well but, did not get any positive response from you. Therefore
, I am trying to highlight this
grave issue. In addition
, the gas stove is also
not working efficiently as from four units only two are heating up. Thus
, making food has become a difficult task.
I want to get this
stuff fixed as soon as possible otherwise
, me and my family are no longer interested in renting this
place. I would appreciate it if you could visit the place in order to look at the broken items.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Simran.Submitted by gill.g24 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite