The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 & 2015.
The bar graph depicts the
number
of households differentiate
on the basis of their total income in three different years in the U.S.
Wrong verb form
differentiated
Overall
, the maximum apartments
were of those whose earning was highest.
The people whose salary was lowest around less than $25,000 Correct quantifier usage
number of apartments
they
had 25 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
houses in the year
2007 which slightly increased around 29 million
, however
it rapidly sunk Add the comma(s)
,however
at
27 Change preposition
to
million
. In addition
, the number
of households with average
salary of $25,000-$49,999 Add an article
an average
were having
Wrong verb form
had
27million
apartments in the Correct your spelling
27 million
year
2007, moreover
after decade
it increased Correct article usage
a decade
to29millions
.
Correct your spelling
to 29 million
On the other hand
, the maximum number
of wages which was $100,000 or more was not consistent as in the year
2007, there were 29 million
apartments which fall
off to 27 Wrong verb form
fell
million
after five years, whereas
, it dramatically rose at
37 Change preposition
to
million
of residences in the year
2015. In contrast
, the number
of houses was consistent with earnings of $50,000-$74,999 at 23million households.Submitted by pooja22nov on
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