The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 & 2015.

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number

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of households

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on the basis of their total income in three different years in the U.S.

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, the maximum

apartments

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were of those whose earning was highest. The people whose salary was lowest around less than $25,000

they

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had 25

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houses in the

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2007 which slightly increased around 29

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,

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it rapidly sunk

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27

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.

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, the

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of households with

average

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salary of $25,000-$49,999

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27million

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27 million

apartments in the

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2007,

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after

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it increased

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to 29 million

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, the maximum

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of wages which was $100,000 or more was not consistent as in the

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2007, there were 29

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apartments which

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off to 27

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after five years,

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, it dramatically rose

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37

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of residences in the

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2015.

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of houses was consistent with earnings of $50,000-$74,999 at 23million households.