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THESE DAYS, VIOLENCE AMONG YOUNG PEOPLE IS BECOMING INCREASINGLY WIDESPREAD/ DISCUSS THE CAUSE AND SOLUTION TO OVERCOME IT.

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Today, youngsters are becoming victims because of many
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 against them. The rates of
violence
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 are increasingly overwhelming these days.
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 of the main factors is bullying among
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 at school.
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 problem should be solved by
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 or governments. Bullying is influencing
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 among
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.
Students
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 always think that someone who has a limitation on his/her physical can be bullied.
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, bullying can affect their mental health. Sometimes, bullied
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 like to be alone when doing something because no
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 can
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 them.
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 can have a huge effect on bullied people in the future. They will not be confident enough when doing something because their potential aspects always be underestimated. To resolve
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,
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 should control their
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 at school.
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 can be done by some programs that are created by them.
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, they can give punishment to
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 who are involved in bullying.
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, if they have problems,
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 can act as an intermediary for
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.
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the government should create strict policies for youngsters. It can be started by giving them an awareness program. Awareness can be given to young people, despite they are still children.
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, they will love and help each other and no
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 will
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 each other.
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, bullying is
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 behaviour and no
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 likes
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. To overcome it, there are several actions that can be taken by people.
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it can be controlled by
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 at school.
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the government should take action in making some procedures and policies to solve
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violence
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