The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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money

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families earn annually in five different salary ranges for 2007, 2011 and 2015.

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were mostly either rich or poor and

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population among them.

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householders from earning less than $25,000 to earning above $100,000 per

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year, adding $25,000 to each middle

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

household distribution
income brackets
annual income
percentage change
trend analysis
income group
significant increase/decrease
steady growth/decline
fluctuations
compared to
in contrast
notably
median income
poverty line
economic factors

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