The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates how much

moeny

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money

each

USA's

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families earn annually in five different salary ranges for 2007, 2011 and 2015.

overall

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, What stands out

the

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in the

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figure is that people in

USA

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the USA

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were mostly either rich or poor and

middle

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the middle

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groups had the

least

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lowest

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population among them.

This

bar chart

seperated

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separated

householders from earning less than $25,000 to earning above $100,000 per

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apply

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year, adding $25,000 to each middle

groups

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something

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emergency happened and I am not available tonight. Sorry for

this

interruption and hope you would have

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available to have

meeting

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tomorrow since

wednesday

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is my examing night I would

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rather

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ratter

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rather

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not have

session

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a session

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

108 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

household distribution
income brackets
annual income
percentage change
trend analysis
income group
significant increase/decrease
steady growth/decline
fluctuations
compared to
in contrast
notably
median income
poverty line
economic factors

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