Lectures given by teachers in universities used to be the only way of teaching students, however, nowadays technology has evolved and made it possible to study online. This causes many people to believe that the lecture system will not be needed in the future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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of
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systems
on campus
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agree
this
viewpoint and agree that due to
the technological modification online teaching approach will be adapted fully in the upcoming times.
First and foremost, the major reason due to
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education
tends to be more convenient and feasible for learners as well as
educators. Both tutors as well as
knowledge seekers can play their roles at
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whereas
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hardwork
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For example
, many schools in Japan prefer this
education
system for more effectiveness and there is a positive influence which is evident apparently. That's why other countries should also
adopt this
approach since it has numerous merits.
Secondly
, this
technique will diminish the cost of transport completely. Education
seekers who are usually late for school will no longer miss buses and therefore
will be on time in
classes. Change preposition
for
As a result
, they will not skip any part of the professor's speech and eventually
there will be a better performance by these candidates. Add a comma
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Moreover
, this
particular approach is more advantageous for parents since it is cost-friendly due to
removal
of transport fees. Correct article usage
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Consequently
, due to
the affordability many people who cannot pay the transport charges will gravitate towards learning. For instance
, many destitute population of Japan could not send their kids to schools because they were very far away and they had to travel miles in order to drop their heirs at school. And after the advancement in educational
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it is more advantageous for them and now they can easily afford it. Add a comma
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Thus
, this
technique will be more cost effective
for many poor people.
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cost-effective
it is clear that
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mode of learning will soon be removed in Correct article usage
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the coming
this
type of education
system will not be required further
due to
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