Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •thank your friend •explain how useful the present is •arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

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Dear Mary, I hope you are doing well till my birthday. I want to say thank you for your valuable gift. I feel so happy about

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. I still couldn’t believe you gifted me

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Apple watch. I really wanted to buy it for a long time.

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helps me a lot

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I am doing my fitness activities. It tracks my health figures

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as heart rates, calories etc. which have been quite important for me recently.

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, I can easily share my health condition with my physician. As you know, I have to take care of my wellness

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my health problems.

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motivates me to do some exercises. So, my healthy habits are slightly increasing.

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, I miss you a lot. So, I would like to offer you a coffee at your convenience. I would like to explain how grateful I am for our face-to-face conversation. Would it be suitable for you to meet me on Saturday at 02:00 pm at the Bekley coffee? I am looking forward to hearing from you. See you soon, Bests, Jane

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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