The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a specie of large fish named the salmon.

The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a specie of large fish named the salmon.
The diagram illustrates the
life
cycle of a species of large fish named the
Salmon
.
Overall
, there are three stages of
life
that happen to the
salmon
, starting from
eggs
until they become adult
salmon
. The
life
cycle starts from
eggs
that lay under the reeds
along with
the small stones in the upper river. In
this
slow-moving current, the
eggs
lay for a maximum of five to six months before they are born into fry with a measure of 3-8 cm long and immigrate to the lower river. In that fast-flowing water, the fry lives for approximately four years. The second stage of
life
starts with the fry transformed into a smolt which is 12-15 cm long and moves to the open sea. In the open sea,
this
smolt will be turned into adult
salmon
and live in there for approximately five years.
Lastly
, the adult
salmon
that can reach 70 - 76 cm long, will move to the upper river to lay their
eggs
.
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