The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a specie of large fish named the salmon.

The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a specie of large fish named the salmon.
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The diagram illustrates the
life
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cycle of a species of large fish named the
Salmon
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.
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, there are three stages of
life
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that happen to the
salmon
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, starting from
eggs
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until they become adult
salmon
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. The
life
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cycle starts from
eggs
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that lay under the reeds
along with
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the small stones in the upper river. In
this
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slow-moving current, the
eggs
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lay for a maximum of five to six months before they are born into fry with a measure of 3-8 cm long and immigrate to the lower river. In that fast-flowing water, the fry lives for approximately four years. The second stage of
life
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starts with the fry transformed into a smolt which is 12-15 cm long and moves to the open sea. In the open sea,
this
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smolt will be turned into adult
salmon
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and live in there for approximately five years.
Lastly
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, the adult
salmon
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that can reach 70 - 76 cm long, will move to the upper river to lay their
eggs
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words life, salmon, eggs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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