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The graph below shows theh number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows theh number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart represents how many people visited a Caribbean island and the way they stayed from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total rate of
tourists
 indicates an upward trend during the given period. First of all, the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships started at the lowest level
about
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of about
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 0.25
million
 and repeated the same rate changes from 2010 to 2013, which changed between 0.25
million
 and 0.5
million
. In 2014, the number of
tourists
 steadily increased, which started at 1
million
 and doubled in 2017. In the case of visitors staying on cruise ships levelled out until 2011 at 0.75
million
, which rose to 1.5
million
 in 2013. From 2013 to 2017, the number of
tourists
 who stayed on cruise ships remained at the same level, which represented 1.5
million
while
 just decreased to 0.75
million
 in 2016.
Finally
, the figure for
a
Correct article usage
the
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 total number of
tourists
 who visited a Caribbean island steadily climbed, from 1
million
 to 3.5
million
 between 2010 and 2017.
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