Some people think that only the government can make changes in the society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
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society
is formed by its Use synonyms
people
and has a lot many diversities and cultural variations depending upon its inhabitants. It is argued that the Use synonyms
government
has the sole responsibility to lead any change in Use synonyms
society
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while
others believe the significant Linking Words
role
of each individual. In my opinion, there is an equal responsibility, influence and action required from the Use synonyms
government
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as well as
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people
in order to make changes in the Use synonyms
society
. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will discuss the same with supportive points.
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Firstly
, In different countries, there is a different system of ruling and laws. Linking Words
For instance
, in a democratic Linking Words
society
like India and the United States of America, the Use synonyms
government
is formed by the Use synonyms
people
and for the Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in Linking Words
this
system, an elected nominee of a particular Linking Words
society
raises societal concerns in the parliament and brings solutions back to improve that. Use synonyms
However
, countries like China and Russia, have communist rule and all decisions for a community are made by the Linking Words
government
. Here individuals play a minimal Use synonyms
role
and have no say or asked for their opinions.
In my opinion, Use synonyms
people
play a significant Use synonyms
role
and the voice and actions needed to reform any Use synonyms
society
. Use synonyms
For example
, inhabitants of a Linking Words
society
are often aware of problems( need for children's parks, parking issues, cultural celebrations etc.) and unless they report or work together to resolve or celebrate them, no outsider or even Use synonyms
government
would be willing to take action. Use synonyms
Moreover
, any kind of dictatorship can only pushback any community or alternatively even in a democratic Linking Words
government
focus would not go into social reformation unless asked to do so by its individuals.
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Finally
, there is a debate regarding whether the Linking Words
government
or the Use synonyms
people
should have the authority to bring changes to Use synonyms
society
. In my opinion, both play an equal and crucial Use synonyms
role
in the development of a Use synonyms
society
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