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Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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life change there are some
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 option they prefer to enjoy their lives and make it easier,whoever ,It changed the way of lifestyle in eating and wearing clothes and education
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disadvantages ,
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 , a leak in relationships, especially family communication and it keeps
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 more busy with social media ,
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, it enters different culture and sometimes different religion and values in specific teenagers influence with the new trend and try to imitation.
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 can find jobs online very fast ,and relationships are increasing because of it , and there are many activities could person involved it in social groups like sports or cooking that make individual has a different and great unconscious. TO Sammriez, I strongly believes that
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technology makes our lives more easily than previous .with the variety of experience could be
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quiet for others around the world .
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