The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the

average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph demonstrates the mean
temperature
during the month and the table represents the mean number of sunny
hours
in three different cities
such
as
London
, New
York
and Sydney. It is interesting to notice that the
temperature
trend in
London
almost repeats the one in New
York
. At the same ,time Sydney’s line graph shows a completely opposite trend with the lowest
temperature
in July,
whereas
it’s the hottest month in the two other cities. Regarding the average climate in New
York
, January is the coldest month of the year with approximately 4
degrees
.
Then
the
temperature
continued rising steadily until it reached its peak in July at almost 30
degrees
.
Following
this
, we can observe that the heat started to decline constantly from July until December for both cities,
London
and New
York
, ending at 10
degrees
and 5
degrees
respectively.
In contrast
to New
York
’s
temperature
, January and December are the hottest ones, over a given time period, almost reaching 25
degrees
. Turning to details, the
temperature
started to decrease from January to July, ending with about 15
degrees
. As we can observe from the table, New
York
ended up with the highest score for sunshine
hours
,
while
London
got the lowest score with only 1180 annual
hours
.
Overall
, we can see that despite the fact that the
temperature
trends of New
York
and
London
look familiar,
London
resulted in the least number of sunshine
hours
throughout the year.
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