The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph demonstrates the mean
temperature
during the month and the table represents the mean number of sunny hours
in three different cities such
as London
, New York
and Sydney.
It is interesting to notice that the temperature
trend in London
almost repeats the one in New York
. At the same ,time Sydney’s line graph shows a completely opposite trend with the lowest temperature
in July, whereas
it’s the hottest month in the two other cities.
Regarding the average climate in New York
, January is the coldest month of the year with approximately 4 degrees
. Then
the temperature
continued rising steadily until it reached its peak in July at almost 30 degrees
. Following
this
, we can observe that the heat started to decline constantly from July until December for both cities, London
and New York
, ending at 10 degrees
and 5 degrees
respectively. In contrast
to New York
’s temperature
, January and December are the hottest ones, over a given time period, almost reaching 25 degrees
. Turning to details, the temperature
started to decrease from January to July, ending with about 15 degrees
. As we can observe from the table, New York
ended up with the highest score for sunshine hours
, while
London
got the lowest score with only 1180 annual hours
.
Overall
, we can see that despite the fact that the temperature
trends of New York
and London
look familiar, London
resulted in the least number of sunshine hours
throughout the year.Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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