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some people think that public health is responsible of the government while others think that individuals are responsible for their health Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

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Given two graphs concerning the using the
Internet
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-> issue.
While
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 the former table reveals the
number
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 of people connected to the
Internet
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 in five main nations namely Switzerland, Germany,
France
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, Spain and the UK, from 1995 to 2004, measured in millions, the latter pie chart demonstrates the figure
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 using the
Internet
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 for shopping online in these countries in 2004.
Overall
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, almost all nations had a growth progressive pattern of shopping on the
Internet
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 in
France
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 was the most significant. In terms of the report on the
Internet
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, an overwhelming majority of the
number
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 of users was accounted for by Britain, which was an
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 trend from 16 to 41 after 9 years. Following that, the
number
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 of users in Germany was 5
million
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 in 1995 before climbing up sharply which reached a peak at 312
million
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 and dropped to 15
million
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at the end
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 of the period. The total
number
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 of
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Internet
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 users in
France
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, Switzerland and Spain was the least significant which was merely approximately 0.5
million
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 and the maximum at 6
million
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 in
all
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the period. Regarding purchasing on the
Internet
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, no other proportion was as high as that of
France
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 which was nearly double the figure of Germany. Switzerland’s sales were over a quarter in 2004.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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