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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food resturants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the eating fast
food
 in restaurants frequency between 2003 and 2013 among the United States of America's
people
. As
it
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can be seen, the highest rate of eating fast foods belongs to eating once a week in 2006 which was the same percentage as eating once or twice a week in 2013.
In contrast
, eating fast
food
 every day in both 2006 and 2013 has the least popularity among other frequencies. It can be observed that eating fast
food
 daily was much more popular in 2003 than the other time periods with close to 5% of
people
. In that year highest rate of eating fast
food
 population belongs to eating it once a week with approximately 31%.
However
, in 2006 had nearly 3% more
people
 than in 2003.
This
 time frequency
also
 had the highest proportion of
people
 in 2006 with nearly 34% of
people
. Another remarkable feature is that 32% of
people
 decided to eat fast
food
 once or twice a month in 2013. That was the highest rate of eating fast
food
 frequency in the daytime.
Furthermore
, eating fast
food
 that time-frequency shows a massive increase from 2006 to 2013. On the opposite,
this
 time-frequency demonstrates strike fall from 2003 to 2006 which is unexpected.
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