The two graphs show the main energy sources in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

The two graphs show the main energy sources in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
The pie charts beneath provide information about five different types of energy
sources
in the United States of America in a given period of ten years. The unit is measured in percentage.
Overall
, oil and natural
gas
were the main
sources
of energy throughout the period
while
natural
gas
as well as
hydroelectric
power
were the least energy source used.
Although
, oil was the main
power
utilized,
however
, it was the highest
power
source. In 1980, the amount of oil consumption in the United States of America was 42% which was higher than the other
sources
. The figure reduced to about 9% in ten years.
Although
, it was still the highest
power
consumed in that period. Natural
gas
was quite similar in both years with 26% in 1980 and 25% in 1990. They recorded the second-highest powerpoint. Hydroelectric
power
was not needed much in America. In fact, it was just 5% in 1980 and remained the same in the following decade. Nuclear
gas
was the same as hydroelectric
power
in 1980,
however
, it doubled in 1990.
In contrast
, cool was recorded among the needed
power
sources
with 22% in 1980. The figure was higher in the next decade a 5% increase.
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